I think you are in a hurry to design this .I will tell you some of the problems, I hope it will help you.
1- The furniture you have chosen for the space is not suitable, Use L-shaped furniture.
2- The bedroom door should not open towards the reception .
3- The paintings you put in the work have made the work very slutty. Finally, use one or two paintings.
4- In my opinion, the scale and size of furniture and other objects are not standard (they look very big).
5- Be sure to include space for the hanger you put in the reception. You have put a lot of paintings in the bedroom, be sure to fix it.
6- Be sure to use hidden lights to achieve better rendering.
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