albanbb , sure, I will.
1) What is this scene? Is this a parking lot? Or is it a balcony?
2) How did the car get here? How to enter and exit? Where to go after you get out of it? Forward to the camera? Jump over the grass?
3) Why does wild grass grow? What are these vases? Why are they empty?
4) What are the concrete slabs on the left? What are they needed for? If you thought about a good view from this balcony, then they only interfere.
5) Why is there such a big tile under the car?
6) What is this dark canopy under which the camera is located?
First you need to analyze the functionality and ergonomics of the space, and then make a design in the artistic sense of the word. And yes, I like the light and atmosphere. And if you think about the rest of the questions and how to implement them - I'm sure it will turn out very well!