Tried to imagine who might live in this room... Clean the curtains, clean the sofa, a box with bottles, wooden bed, chaos all over the place... In my opinion, the idea is not fully thought out. A man or a wom? A wom or a man?
Cables of hanging lamps in pictures 1 and 2 are not straight like they should be in reality. Two computers are very close to each other, that would not be comfortable for to people to work at the same time. But overall it looks very nice :)